Reviewer: Beecharmer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2014 1:40 am Title: Chapter 1

Lol, poor Tristan and well done Timms !

Reviewer: shesings Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2014 9:47 pm Title: Chapter 1

Ah beautiful! I'm floored with shingles at the moment so up for fun in my reading!

Reviewer: Jane Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2014 2:58 pm Title: Chapter 1

Fie, man, fie!

Rather apposite, though, as I had only just this week managed to get my hands on William Mayne's A Swarm in May set at Canterbury choir school - many echoes.

Author's Response:

I love how you get my musical references, Jane :D must look up that book…

Reviewer: Somone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2014 11:54 am Title: Chapter 1

Slightly confused, though, about how the teacher manages to identify boys by their shoes - wouldn't they be uniform?

Author's Response:

Just run with it! (Size of foot, shape of shoe, pattern of scuff marks, or maybe it's just a bit of creative licence!)

Reviewer: chattie Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2014 9:34 am Title: Chapter 1

Loved the working of RL into a drabble, Finn!

Author's Response:

It made sense for him! 

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Date: 02 Apr 2014 2:34 am Title: Chapter 1


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