Date: 20 Jun 2018 3:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
I've thought of rewriting Mary Lou with Jessica telling her to mind her own business! From Jessica's point of view-she'd been banished first during the week,then to another county,then to another country. What was she to think?I'd have said that "at least Rosamund's got a home-I haven't!" Jessica's weekly letter home should have read "Mrs.Sefton-They say I have to write to you.I just want to come home."
Date: 09 Jul 2011 10:25 am Title: Chapter 1
What an interesting start this is. I like the way you've explored the way that various people would react to such a huge change, and the care they're taking as they enter unchartered territory.
Thank you for posting! :)