Reviewer: Mark Taha Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2018 3:10 pm Title: Chapter 1

I've thought of rewriting Mary Lou with Jessica telling her to mind her own business! From Jessica's point of view-she'd been banished first during the week,then to another county,then to another country. What was she to think?I'd have said that "at least Rosamund's got a home-I haven't!"  Jessica's weekly letter home should have read "Mrs.Sefton-They say I have to write to you.I just want to come home."

Reviewer: Squirrel Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2011 10:25 am Title: Chapter 1

What an interesting start this is.  I like the way you've explored the way that various people would react to such a huge change, and the care they're taking as they enter unchartered territory.

Thank you for posting! :)



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