Reviewer: Fliss Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2011 9:30 pm Title: Chapter 8

I'm really enjoying this - it feels very real

thanks Vick

Reviewer: emma t Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2011 10:31 pm Title: Chapter 8

Glad that Jo has realised that she should not push Jack away :)

Reviewer: JS1 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2011 10:18 am Title: Chapter 8

Just caught up with the last few chapters - lovely. Thanks Vick.

Reviewer: Eleanore Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2011 12:53 am Title: Chapter 8

Oh, this is such a lovely view of Jo's relationship with Jack - and so realistic that it would take time for them to learn how to live with each other as a couple.

Reviewer: Chubby Monkey Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2011 6:07 pm Title: Chapter 8

I don't know why the SDL decided not to tell me about these updates, but thankyou for them. I have to say that, sitting here with a really bad cold and not breathing properly, I can certainly empathise with Madge and Robin! It's really nice to see Jack and Jo getting closer again, especially as it finally looks as if Jo might be getting better again (for now, anyway - how much do I trust you?)

Author's Response:

Who? Me?? I don't know what you, mean! ;-)

Reviewer: katesian Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2011 9:16 am Title: Chapter 8

New to this reviewing and I have Just read all the previous chapters and think this story is great.

Am loving this Jo and like how she is thinking about life differently.

I am looking forward to more.

Author's Response:

Thanks for taking the time to review, Katesian.  It is much appreciated.

Reviewer: Beecharmer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2011 7:53 am Title: Chapter 8

Really really good, as ever. You describe the spiral of worry so well, and it is so nice seeing Jack and Joey learning how to live with each other and trust each other. It also shows so well that despite not being a mother in this universe, Jo naturally wants to take care of everybody, which makes being the one of the ones who needs looking after so much harder.

Reviewer: Elder in Ontario Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2011 3:15 am Title: Chapter 8

It's natural that Joey would continue to worry about Robin and Madge for as long as they were ill, especially since she herself isn't allowed to go and either see them or look after them - and was unable to accept Jack's reassurance that all would be well in the end.  Thank goodness that finally, Madge was able to talk to her, and to provide that vital reassurance, not only about herself, but about Robin, too.  Hopefull Joey will now take more care of herself, as well as learning to be more open with Jack when things are worrying her.

Thanks, Vick.


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