Date: 24 Jun 2011 10:44 pm Title: A shock
Brilliant jayj, it fits really beautifully. Written really well as ever, and believable. The bold makes it a little difficult to read, it might be better in italics maybe?
hmm, I think I need to use italics as italics, so I'm going to have to keep the bold bits in bold, I'm 'fraid *shrugs*
Glad you like it, though... :)
Date: 23 Jun 2011 11:27 pm Title: Only a kiss
Thank you jayj, it looks even better than the bit we discussed ! I doubt my words are often defined as words of wisdom!! I think you have covered a difficult subject very well here, and very plausibly. Your Kathy feels really like the Kathy in New Mistress and a lot of the drabbles, and it fits in beautifully with Kathy's rather over the top reaction to M-L in the book.